Zerar - final added for approval

Cool I see you lurking! =) Finishing up 1 commission and starting yours within a day or so. =)

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C/C PLEASE - you know who you are. Give it to me!!






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http://www.theangrycrayon.com/images/zerarmockup.jpg

Zerar 21 years ago
WOOT! I look forward to seeing it! Very Happy
ROzbeans 21 years ago
What i was planning on doing was doing a scaled up shot of your sword and face. A nice tight shot. Let me know what you think too of the background. =)
Zerar 21 years ago
I am totally digging the face/sword thing... but as far as the background goes, it's nice, but Tetzou got a really sweet SS of Anguish the other night... was wondering if he could send it to you while I am away on vacation or something and you could use that in the background if you think that will work once you see it. Very Happy
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Definitely, send it and any other screens you have of that zone. I have zip =)
Zerar 21 years ago
Actually come to think of it I'd rather have Shar Val in the background... think we can work that out? I dig how my hometown looks from the outside... all leet n' shiz. Very Happy
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Zerar
Actually come to think of it I'd rather have Shar Val in the background... think we can work that out? I dig how my hometown looks from the outside... all leet n' shiz. Very Happy


Yeah I can do that. I'll run over to the city and get some screenies.
Zerar 21 years ago
You OWN!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
I got some screenies tonight of shar vhal. =( Its ugly. I'll post them tomorrow so you can see though.
ROzbeans 21 years ago






This is just lightened a little, i'd touch them up more, highlight parts. But here are 3 shots of shar vhal. Honestly...there's not much there =/ The ones that have skyline, I can add sky in, do creepy clouds or whatnot. Lemme know =)
Rikr 21 years ago
Sorry for pokin my nose in this thread, what about a SS of the entrance to SV. The Lion emblems are pretty groovy. 🙂



Ok, Im leaving now. hehehehe
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Rikr
Sorry for pokin my nose in this thread, what about a SS of the entrance to SV. The Lion emblems are pretty groovy. 🙂



Ok, Im leaving now. hehehehe


Gimme watcha got!!!!!
Zerar 21 years ago
They are looking nice! Could I bother you to make me a Magelo and a neat-o avatar too? I'll donate nicely. Very Happy Also, you rock! Looks really good!
ROzbeans 21 years ago


ROzbeans 21 years ago
Note to myself:

Zerar Thecatofwar
Overlord of Triton
1,000 AA's and counting!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
/bump

Final for approval up top.
Guest 21 years ago
hmmm... c/c...

OK, the shoulder piece has sharp corners - you should round the edges out so it looks less blocky. The fingers on his hand holding the sword are kinda purply and it looks funny. I think you should make the last name "TheCatofWar" and capitalize povar. I think you could enhance the details on the armor by adding some highlights to the chest piece and making the chainmail under his arm silver rather than yellow.

BTW I really like how you did the name text.
Tetzou 21 years ago
thumbs up from the roomie Laughing
Zerar 21 years ago
Ryala has some good points... I don't want the last name to be done like she said though... my name is not like that in game. I totally dig the name text though. Awesome font. I like the idea of making the underarm chainmail silver as well. so far... I am digging it though. I like the sig a lot! thanks Mae!!!!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
COOL. Thanks Ry, I'll get on that right now. I'll upload in a few =)
ROzbeans 21 years ago


Better? Also I can't highlight the armor anymore without totally making it look like a yellow blob of color =( I tried burning the shadows deep though, give it a nice contrast.